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"You wretched little thing. You serve no purpose to me. Look at yourself. It's pathetic. The son of a king and this is what turns out. A scrawny little colt who can barely stay standing." The large stag stared down at him with hate-filled eyes. He snorted and his eyes flicked back. His head snapped around and he stomped a hoof at the incoming equine.

"Leave him be, highness. He might be small but he is your son," the mare said as she walked towards them. She stared at the small foal with disgust as she saw him. "He is a puny one. Where's the mother?" She gave a sideways glance to both sides.

The stag looked up from staring down the colt. "She left after birthing him. She was angered. She wanted a powerful young one. She got this..." He glanced down at the colt, searching for a word. "...this creature. She disappeared and left him here." He leaned his head down and nudged the colt harshly. "Stand up. You are not welcome in the herd." He snorted loudly and his ears flattened to his head. He pawed the ground next to him, daringly close to the poor foal's body. One more inch and he'd be hit...the large hoof suddenly lifted stomped down, landing on the creature's body.



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Thundering hooves churned the earth as the stag raced along the river. The thick, long grass whipped his legs as he sprinted by. 'He doesn't matter. All that matters now is the new place I've found,' he thought to himself.

Slamming to a halt, dirt, grass, and snow kicked up as he slid. He stood and his tail swished back and forth. Gazing around, he surveyed the land he found. Tall grass flaked with snow covered the majority of the ground. Rivers ran through them, some swift and some calm with ice surrounding the edges. He turned in one smooth motion and stared down into one. His reflection stared back at him with guarded eyes and a proud dismeaner. All a fake, blocking his hurt and dismantled inside. But no one would know that. They could threaten him, even kill him, but no one could hurt him any more than he'd already been hurt. He'd never healed.

'Stop it! It doesn't matter anymore. Snap out of it!' he scolded himself inwardly. His pelt shuddered, suddenly feeling a cold breeze blow by. He lifted his head defiantly and snorted out loudly, large puffs of air showing from the cold.

"I, Utopia, claim these lands as my own! Anyone who dares trespass will feel the wrath of my hate and anger. Those who try to dispatch me from the land, you will see what you put yourself against," he bellowed, as if yelling it to the wind that dared chill him.

He glanced sideways as if to catch a glimpse of any other equine in the area, but he was alone.
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A buckskin mare trotted into this unknown territory. She had been walking around Pele's land. Just doing nothing. Wanting to meet new people was her motto, and she stuck to it like glue. Her daggers slid softly into the compacted soil. The grass, angrily whipping her legs in the breeze. In that breeze, her main and tail lifted highly into the air, waving like a banner or flag.

She was Star. Named after her personality. She shined like a star when she was happy. Though, she could disappear sometimes like some stars do. Star was, as you say, odd.

Her body tensed and she halted immediately as a sound floated into her ears. Not just a sound. A voice. A voice of a male stallion claiming a land. How did she know? She could tell by his words and voice.

"I, Utopia, claim these lands as my own! Anyone who dares trespass will feel the wrath of my hate and anger. Those who try to dispatch me from the land, you will see what you put yourself against.

Utopia eh? What an odd but unique name. At least it was original. I let out a deep breath, meant for him to hear me. I then cautiously took 7 steps to wards him. I was about 20 feet away from him now.

So, Utopia's the name? Well, I might have to warn you. Queen Pele isn't the nicest horse around. Trust me on that. I'm Star just in case you are wondering. So you are claiming this land, or so I hear...

She spoke with a hint of happiness in her voice. She was glad to have met this young stag. He would be one of her friends she assumed. He also, had a buckskin pelt. Though, she could not tell what breed he was. It didn't matter anyways. They would be friends, if he accepted her. If he declined, well it wouldn't matter she would keep wandering, even though it would be a great loss to lose him. He was handsome, she could say that. She smiled slightly.

Before Queen Pele arrives, I must ask, Do you think you can handle this land?

She was only asking to see his answer. Queen Pele would probably ask the same thing, she did not know though. She had only met Pele once or twice. And that was from a distance. If, she could meet Queen Pele. Oh, she dreaded that moment. She had heard rumors that Pele was cold and heartless. She doubted them to be true. No horse was cruel and heartless. They could be mean and rude but never cold, heartless, cruel or anything else.

Unless Pele was a harsh Queen. A Queen that would kill others that defined her. Oh, the horror that would be. She slightly shuddered at that thought. She would hate to be stuck in a situation like that. Her withers twitched slightly. Unable to think any more about it, she stomped her hoof on the ground, to rid herself of the evil thoughts that taunted her.


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« Reply #2 on Mar 12, 2009, 12:16pm »

Pele, QUEEN of the Proud




The sound of iron hooves reached her ears first, and then of the spray this intruder was leaving as he ground her lands to a pulp. Fool.

She swiveled her head round to find the animal who was making a mess of her terra, her kingdom. At least what's left of it....

Oh bother, another my Lady. And look at him. He barely looks fit to lead one of your lands. You must test him!


the voice vibrated through her skull. Lucy was right. This tan hued colt would not so easily claim her lands as his own. It was not simple like that, in these parts, when lands are scarce and decent equines even scarcer. Not just your average joe can rule a land like this.

She stepped from atop her caverns, where she had been watching her pathetic herd roam about, meaningless.

Snorting, her lean pillars paced easily down the rocky incline. Hoofs sent rocks clattering and debris flying. Sigh.

She leapt from the bottom and picked up a jolting trot. Her knees came up high and Proud. This stallion better know who he was dealing with. It was then that the brute spoke his claim.


"I, Utopia, claim these lands as my own! Anyone who dares trespass will feel the wrath of my hate and anger. Those who try to dispatch me from the land, you will see what you put yourself against,"


By the Gods lady, did you hear him. Did not even ask first, it's already his!

Anger seared within her bones, her pelt hot with it. She moved into a dangerous gallop, pounding her flints into the ground with every step. She neared him, and a scream grew within her. IN her anger, she did not even see the mare.

She locked her hocks, sliding towards the disrespectful brute and stopping just inches from his face. Her scream finishing when her words began

YOU!! You! You think you can come here and just claim a land. I don't think you understand the concept. These lands are MINE!!! And you will NOT challenge me Sir, for you will not escape with your life. You ASK me for one of my lands. I doubt a scrawny thing like you will ever rule here! Speak wisely colt, for these words are your future

She was panting though she was not tired, her hatred of this stallion was causing angered emotions within her. She often held back her feelings until stupid beasts like this roam throughout her Terras.

It was then she noticed the meek and too kind mare standing near. The smile on her face was sickening.

Dear, in case you haven't noticed this is PROUD land. Wipe that smirk off your face before I do it for you.

What are these alliances coming too? She should be with the divine, or perhaps the silent


I know, our herds are kind and weak, bad blood. Winning this war will be impossible...

Her glare returned to the brute, She stepped back a bit to really take him in. Notimpressive.....


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« Reply #3 on Mar 12, 2009, 8:46pm »

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Whoever speaketh of Cthulhu shall remember that he but seemeth dead, he sleeps, and yet he does not sleep, he has died and yet he is not dead, asleep and dead though he is, he shall rise again. Again it should be shown that is not dead which can eternal lie, and with strange aeons even death may die
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I follow silently behind Pele as she trod off towards one of her lands. I wasn’t certain if I should or not, but I decided I may as well. She may have a task for me, or may have an equine I am to work with to make a warrior. I did not follow meekly as her Elbort did, but I followed with my head raised (lower than hers, of course), and my blue eyes full of fire. I heard the words of the stallion just as my queen did, and I knew she wasn’t going to be happy about it.

And indeed, she was not. She raved at the stallion and I merely stood back, watching the goings on. I saw the mare, but spoke nothing to her. My eyes were trained on my queen, taking in the way her muscles moved beneath her pelt as she screamed at the stallion. Yes, she wanted to do something bad to him. I could see it. He would be a fool if he didn’t know it. She stepped back and fell silent, studying him. It was then that I took a step forward, raised my muzzle to her ear and spoke softly.

Perhaps there is something I can do?

I looked at her through blue eyes. I wanted to prove myself to her, though I still don’t know why. Perhaps it was because she was generous enough to allow me the position of General; or perhaps it was simply the fact that I wanted blood. I wanted to taste it, feel it on my body. I could feel my hatred rising at the thought of murdering this silly colt.

Perhaps a test? Have him fight me for this land if he wants it. Should he win, he can have it. Should he lose…well, that is for you to decide. Would that please you?

I don’t much care if the other stallion heard me or not. It was simply a suggestion for my queen. If she found it acceptable, than it would be so. If she did not, she would simply tell me where to go and continue with her plans as if I hadn’t interrupted. I could only hope she wouldn’t look upon me unfavorably. I wanted to please her, to prove that I am worth whatever title she gives me.

I take a step sideways to offer Pele her space, and to allow her to mull over the idea I planted in her mind. Now we’ll see what happens.





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So I'm not alone.

The large brute backed up a few steps to get a glance at all the equines that had suddenly appeared. Another stallion and two mares. He did a quick sweep over the mares. One, a buckskin like himself, was quite a beauty. The other looked familiar. He watched her and dipped his head slightly in greeting. He then walked forward the few steps, almost nose to nose with the queen, although he had to lower his head to see eye to eye. His words were quiet but filled with firm authority.

"My lady. You speak loudly with your words. I'm simply new and didn't know they were all your land. How is one to know when they have just arrived?"

He stated it simply and flicked his tail at her, as if dismissing the subject for the moment. He turned to the new mare. He looked her over and a smirk played on his mug.

"She makes a point, deary. You portray yourself unlike a proud. Not rude or commanding, like the queen over here." He purposely threw a glance toward Pele. "Although you are quite a sight, Star. And yes, I do believe I can handle this land. I would like to get started with a herd, but Pele must agree, yes?"

He then turned his harsh gaze to the new brute. His harks flattened, then flicked forward. "And you, old one, are...?" he asked without emotion. His eyes revealed nothing, his thoughts wandered.

Pele coming in and refusing to let me rule. Another mare here who hardly acts proud. And now this other stallion coming? What next, a giant squirrel with four eyes?

Snapping back to reality, he turned his attention back to Pele. He stood next to her and flicked an ear towards her.

"So, my queen. How may I prove myself worthy, seeming you consider me only an inconsiderate young colt. Whilst you scream and talk arrogantly at me, you seem to be acting quite young for your age, madam."

He looked down at her with a small smile playing at the corners of his lips. She was a pretty one. Big headed and a talker, but pretty and commanding none the less.

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"The mother may be a pretty young thing and I a large and handsome stallion, but apparently the match doesn't work. Look at the puny creature it created. She might talk large but she didn't pull through."

The large stag glared down at the tiny colt Utopia. Fear and anger blazed in his eyes, staring up at his father. He'd known him for hardly twenty minutes and he was already insulting him and his mother. Although his mother had disappeared... His father looked over at the other mare that had shown up. "

"Find her. Bring her to me. I'll take care of her after this little...thing is out of the way. She has no use to me anymore if she doesn't make me warriors."


The mare bowed and swiftly took off after Utopia's mother. He glanced up at his father, who was pawing a large hoof in the sod, ears flattened to his skull and his lip curled back.

Then, everything went black.


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She may be a pretty young mare but that doesn't mean it will turn into anything, Utopia. You're being as immature as she said you were.

Turning attention back to the audience, he snorted loudly and bobbed his head while waiting for answers.


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« Reply #5 on Mar 12, 2009, 11:32pm »

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Star sighed.d She dipped a little bit to Pele. She could not yell at Pele, she wouldn't dare to. This stag though, she could certainly yell at him. See, all this sweetness, is a trick. It always works on enemies. She looks sweet and innocent like the dumb silents. However, she is angered fast, and will attack. She smirked slightly.

Who are YOU to come and tell me I do not act like a Proud. You do not know me. My sweet an innocent act, is my greatest trick. It is my first attack on an enemy! I always test it out. How DARE you say I do not portray myself as a proud. Fine you want me too? How bout you shut your mouth and wait for Queen Pele to speak. If she accepts I will follow you, if she does not however, I will not care. I might follow you I might follow someone else. I do not make decisions based on first impressions though, unlike you sir. I, star, am intelligent. I use my sweetness as a defense and attack Now, if you want me to prove it then I will! GOT IT!?

She wasn't shouting everything. Only parts. She was talking very loudly. He said she did not act like a proud. How bout now.... her eyes gleamed with anger. How dare he say that. Who was he to say that. Of course, she knew she went to far on some parts, she didn't care. She didn't deserve to be disrespected like that. Queen Pele was a great exception though. She honored and looked up to her majesty. Not this fool though. She wouldn't care bout him.

She let out a loud sigh. She knew that wasn't true. She DID care about him. But why? Why did her stomach get butterflies every time she looked at him? Could it be a crush? Impossible. Or maybe it is true. Maybe she did like this stallion. She would have to warn him about her short wick or anger though. Light it on fire, and she would go off. That would always be a problem. Though, it proved she was a proud. She was proud indeed. Proud with herself. She liked how she grew. To shout and order the ones who disrespected her. Though she would never shout and yell commands to the Queen. It had 'instant death' written all over it.

Star held her head high to the stallion. She stared at his eyes as if challenging him to shout back. She knew he probably would. Though she wasn't certain. This stallion could do anything, she did not know him that well yet. He could attack her, he could do nothing. It was all up to him. Himself. Not her. Or Queen Pele.

Star then seen another stallion. She recognized him instantly. Cthulhu. How did she know him though? Even SHE didn't know. But she did know she had met this horse somewhere before. Probably heard him talking with someone else.


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Utopia glanced sideways at Star. He let her finish speaking, humor playing in his eyes and a smile tugging at his maw. She was yelling at him? Ha!

"Are you finished, femme? I am awaiting the queen. I may be bold enough to make snap judgements, but at least I have a pokerface. You wear your heart and feelings on your sleeve."

He snorted emotionlessly. This young mare was intriguing though. He studied her, gazing into her eyes as if trying to look into her mind. She was different. She held herself more confidently then he'd expected. It was a slight surprise, though his expression showed nothing of the sort. A thought trickled into his mind:

What is this feeling? It's something I've never felt before...Not anger, hurt, hate...it's unfamiliar. What am I feeling?!

He watched her, as if feeling what she was feeling. He had a weird feeling in the pit of his stomach. She was...was surely something. He tore his gaze from Star and planted it on Pele. She was quite something as well. But Pele had a different aura around her. She carried herself, not Proud necessarily, but arrogant and a tad conceited...not that he'd say it outloud at the moment. She was probably angry enough as was at him.

He shook his head to rid the thoughts and continued glancing from mare to mare.


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« Reply #7 on Mar 13, 2009, 9:02am »

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The rage that had suppressed inside Pele only reemerged with his bold and blatant words. Was he stupid? Of course, he would not be getting this land with such a disrespectful demeanor. And to call the Queen young? You must be joking.

Will you let this petty beast live? Or shall we have your new King torture him and force him to be a divine? Ohh, that sounds wonderful!


He's not my King yet, but my heart yearns for him more and more every second. And No, I will do neither. I need all the horsepower I can muster in these times, and with my new Beau,

she threw a glance at Chthulhu, but just stared. He would understand that she could show no emotion towards him right now, for when dealing with young hotheaded beasts like this he would only use it against her.

I believe I'll be able to handle anything thrown at me.....You know Lucy, He'll make a great King....and Father...

Father?

These words brought Pele back to her task at hand and she spoke, words that would shock Cu, and hopefully, lift his Spirits and Pride for his nation

My King, step beside me, help me make this decision. Oh and No, you will not fight him for he will be destroyed, but perhaps you can test him in other ways, or we will grant him a harsher land?

Swinging her head around she snapped her teeth

Stand back Brute, you are too close to the Queen, and do not deserve to even smell my Breath

One again her eyes flickered to the other mare, a buckskin, whom from her words, she was mistaken about. She smiled, which was hard to muster out of this Queen, but it was well deserved. She directed her attention to the mare, hope gleaming in her eyes

Oh mare, your tactics are brilliant, and you are one of the best animals I have seen in many days. I am tempted to grant this land to you, Love, but you have not asked claim yet. Maybe you could claim another land? You would rule magnificently, and I would have the General himself train you! Yes, you will be a valuable weapon!

Again her eyes returned to the ungrateful bastard, a scowl was plastered among her lips

Brute, you have good conformation, and based on the fact that I need better stock here, I will give you a chance. Tomorrow morning at first light you will report to my caverns, and go to training with both I and My King Cthulhu, is that understood? If you prove worthy of these lands, they are yours.

she turned to leave, happy that this was over when she remembered her new project

Oh and Star, you come tonight, to my caverns love, and we will see about you fate

As she turned to leave she brushed her lean body along her mate's side. He felt so good. The time was coming, yes, for a new life to begin....


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And Sara, Im so happy you replied here. I hope you know I have been grounded, and any time I get on I have to reply to things necessary for Pele to really be at, but I should have time this afternoon to finally reply to Chu, Im just gonna play it once they return form this meeting okies! And congrats, Chu is king!



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Father, eh? So you’ve decided I’m worth your time? Good, I’m glad. I’d hate to have to kill someone for looking at you the wrong way. I looked at her as she looked my way, and knew she had something going on inside that head of hers that she wouldn’t reveal. And then she spoke. King. My heart soared, though I did not show any emotion outwardly. To do so would make it seem as if she had chosen a king at random, and that wouldn’t do. No, she would appear as if she had tested me as hard as she would test this new colt, and he would learn to respect her or he would face my wrath.

I moved to stand beside Pele and listened as she spoke, pretending to ponder her words. In truth, I was still stuck one the word “king.” Yes, it had done as intended – shocked me, and made me want all the more for better blood and harsher equines. Though we are the proud, they will learn respect. They will quake in fear as I, or my queen walk through their lands. They will bow their heads low and pray we do not kick them unconscious. Heh. Maybe that’s a little much, but I can dream, can’t I?

We will decide his fate soon enough. We don’t want to make any rash decisions.

It was a partial-truth. We would discuss his fate, but to do it here would only lead to him being disemboweled or something. As much as Pele may want to do so, it would be catastrophic. Though she did seem to see reason. I was pleased, but obviously didn’t show it. I was about to leave with Pele when she spoke to the mare – Star, it was. I gave her the once-over though didn’t say a word. Pele seemed to approve, so who I was I to disagree?

I turned to view the stallion. I wasn’t sure about him. He was arrogant, yes, but he did have a point. How would you know the lands are ruled by a single leader when you have only just arrived. Perhaps it is wisest to seek out another before you try to lay claim to a land? I had done something similar, and it nearly lead to my being gelded. I shuddered at the thought.

You would be wise to not keep her waiting. First light and not a minute later.

I let my gaze fall once more to the mare. Yes, I would love to have her, but I had promised Pele I would not dishonor her. I sighed softly. Yes, I could look, but it really sucked to not be able to touch. I would train her in the art of combat, but when it came to her silly mare emotions, she was on her own. She seemed to know what she was doing.

With that, I turned to follow Pele.





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« Reply #9 on Mar 13, 2009, 7:37pm »

let's break this >>UTOPIA




Utopia looked at his queen and nodded briskly. The sun was already beginning to dip down in the sky so he had a little while until sunrise again.

"I will be there at first light, my queen."

He watched her, eyes guarded and that feeling in the pit of his stomach vanished. The king followed Pele as she turned around to leave. He snorted and his eyes flashed dangerously. If he tried to pull anything around him, Utopia would defend himself. Cautiously risking a glance in Star's direction, he knew he'd protect her as well. The feeling returned to him, like something fluttering in his stomach and his mind going blank. What was going on with him?

Shaking his head slightly from side to side, he cleared his thoughts and opened his mouth to speak:

"Well, you could stay here for the night if you wish. That is, after you go to the Queen after sundown."

Or, at least he had tried to say that. What came out was more like a weird hiss of air meaning to be words. He closed his mouth, cleared his throat, and tried again.

"I mean, you might want to go. Queen Pele awaits you. Then, maybe you could come back here."

He watched her for a reaction, ears flicking back and forth. Somehow, an emotion kicked in and his Proud-ness took over. He stood up straight, pawed the ground with his hoof, and snorted loudly. He walked slowly towards her, circling her. He grazed his maw down her spine, his tail flicking around her legs.

"Would you like to come back to me, dear?"


he whispered in her ear, then facing her and awaiting a reaction and answer. Looking into her eyes, he realized who she reminded him of. His mother. Pristine and pure on the outside, devilish and proud inside. He shook his head. He'd never met his mother. How could he know anything like that?

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Charrie: Utopia, 4yr Warmblood stallion
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lets break this >>UTOPIA;
get the party started! --->{NEFERET}
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« Reply #10 on Mar 14, 2009, 1:29am »

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The stars are your past, present and future. They watch over you. They ARE you....
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Star had bowed her head to the queen. A smirk pulling at the corners of her mouth. She was grateful that the queen admired her tactics. It was indeed her greatest skill, and her most favorite thing to work with.

Thank you, Queen Pele, I am pleased at how much you accept me. I would love to claim a land, but none other then this one. I love this land. So vibrant and beautiful. Though, I would very much love....to rule by Utopia.

She inhaled deeply. Holding her breath as the Queen walked away. Yes, she did like Utopia. In fact...she thought she was in love. She exhaled as the queen was out of sight.

I will go see her after....me and you....er- talk.

She spoke with awkward- ness in her voice. She didn't know what to say. She stared into his beautiful eyes. When he started circling her, she closed her eyes and inhaled his scent. Her withers slightly shook when he grazed her spine. She could feel his tail lashing at her legs. It stung a bit, but it felt good.

When he whispered into her ear, she opened her eyes. She smiled and licked his cheek. She took a few steps closer to him, to make sure she was touching his body. The warmth of his body seeped into hers. It warmed every part of her. She nudged him slightly on the neck.

I would VERY much love to come back to you...

She hit his rump with her tail. A tiny smile spread across her face. Yes, she was in love. In love with an arrogant fool. An arrogant fool that she fell for.

Star put her head under his and closed her eyes. She could stand still like this forever. Though, she didn't have time to do that forever. She had to go meet Queen Pele. She would leave as soon as they were 'done'.


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